Post by Erik Mouse on Apr 2, 2017 4:04:27 GMT -5
At this time, before I can progress further in this game, I have been working somewhat on the storyline to figure out where to be going next. The ideas that I have so far are these while I have started a bit of a story similar to the game.
It starts with the main character who is Shippo, the fox boy with the bushy tail, who was witnessing a battle going on between his father and the Thunder Brothers, Hiten and Manten. His father is a full furred multi-tailed fox. While witnessing the battle, there is suddenly a bright flash and after it fades quickly, Hiten, Manten and Shippo's father have disappeared. Shippo, not knowing what just happened, starts looking around and suddenly feels the presence of someone there, yet no one is there. He becomes really scared and runs off in a direction down a path that leads to a well. When he comes to the well, Shippo finds he is thirsty and decides to see if he can get water from it. However, upon trying to get water, he falls down into the well and suddenly finds himself falling through what looks like space. Next thing he knows, he lands on something hard and finds himself in a dark area that turns out to be a room with a ceiling. He wonders where he fell in from and soon moves on to explore the underground sewer tunnels he is from. After a while, he comes to a dead end, but finds a ladder going up somewhere and climbs up it.
At the top of the ladder, Shippo sees an opening that looks like the way out and heads outside into the daylight. Upon coming out into the daylight, Shippo finds he is in an unfamiliar hilly area and makes his way down to a nearby forest trail. Here, Shippo comes to a fork in the trail where he can go straight or left and heads to the left. He continues on and comes to a fenced in area with a gate over the trail. Seeing the gate, Shippo heads in to explore. Here, I was going to have this the Forest Haven Area with the kids, Erik and Alice Todd, but at this time I am thinking to change my mind on that because Erik and Alice Todd are being used in another story of mine and I am starting to feel this and that story might clash with each other. Instead, I am currently thinking Shippo comes up towards a playhouse hangout in the forest area where he runs into a girl name Margie or Margie discovers him. Upon seeing Shippo, Margie asks him why he is out here alone and Shippo tells her his father told him his mother was gone sometime after he was done and the story about what happened recently to his father and how he got there. After hearing Shippo, Margie tells him that she is sorry to hear that and that he should come back with her to her home as it would be better than staying out alone and starving to death.
Shippo takes Margie up on her offer and tells her his name is Shippo and Margie then says her name is Margie. He then follows Margie back to her home and Margie notices his fluffy tail and says what a cute fluffy tail he has as he is the first one she has seen with one. Shippo giggles a bit and Margie then says lets head back to her home and meet her mom as she is sure she will let him stay. After walking for a while, they come to the north gate of the forested area and pass through it into Margie's yard. They soon come to Margie's house and go inside into the big combination living room / dining room area where they find Margie's mom. Just after Margie says to her mom that she is home, her mom sees Shippo and asks who is that with her. Margie tells her mom he is Shippo and she found him in her forested play area why she was out there. Her mom responds to her that she knows better than to bring home strange boys. Moments later, Margie's mom goes to Shippo and asks him where is his parents. Shippo responds by explaining to her about his parents. Afterwards, Margie's mom sees Shippo's fluffy tail and says he has a cute fluffy tail and is the first she has seen with one around here. Margie then asks her mom if Shippo can stay with them since he has nowhere else to go. Margie's mom responds saying that since he has a cute fluffy tail and he has nowhere else to go, he can stay.
Upon hearing her mom, Margie thanks her and asks where Shippo can stay. Her mom then tells Margie that Shippo can stay in the place near here on their property since it has been empty for some time except for a haystack, a cabinet, and some tables and chairs. Margie then says that sounds good and will take him over there to get him settled in. Moments later, Margie turns to Shippo and says she will take him over to the place nearby so he can check it out. Shippo responds saying it sounds like a nice place for him to stay in. Afterwards, Margie's mom says she is Margie's mom and says she is sure he will love the hospitality here they can give him and if things get too bad for him out in the place nearby, he is welcome to come back in here and sleep in the spare bed in Margie's room. Hearing her, Shippo smilies a bit while Margie turns and heads back to the door. Shippo goes to follow Margie as she leads him back outside to the place they were talking about. When they get there, they go inside and Shippo sees everything Margie's mom said is there really is there. He sees the haystack and heads over to the bottom of it to lay down to rest while Margie comes over to hug him and make him comfortable. Shippo falls asleep instantly to rest while Margie gives him a kiss and then heads to the door to leave. Just as she comes to the door, Margie's dad comes in and Margie says hi to him and didn't expect him to come in here.
He responds by saying that he just came to see the boy Margie's mom told him about" Margie's dad then goes over to Shippo laying at the bottom of the haystack asleep. He soon turns and goes back to the door to leave. When he comes to the door, Margie's dad says Shippo does look cure for a boy who is currently asleep and that he agrees with Margie's mom that he can stay with them and in there as it is also okay with him. He then leaves and Margie takes one last look at Shippo sleeping and then leaves Shippo alone to sleep. Several hours later, it is evening and Shippo wakes up from his rest and finds he is hungry. He gets up and decides to go find Margie and get something to eat and heads to the door to go outside. Once outside, Shippo heads to Margie's house and goes inside to find Margie and a boy his age along with her mom and dad at the table eating dinner. Moments later, Margie turns to see Shippo and says to him it is good he came to join them for dinner as she was thinking of bringing something out to him to eat, and tells him to come have a seat. Upon hearing Margie, Shippo goes to the table to sit down and Margie's mom gives him a plate of dinner and Shippo proceeds to eat. When they finish dinner, Margie says to Shippo she will be coming out to where he is staying soon to make sure he is comfortable for the night.
Margie's dad then gets up from the table and says to Shippo that he is Margie's dad and is nice to meet him. Then he turns to Margie's mom and tells her that he will be departing in the morning for the mine up north to search and dig for treasure. Afterwards, he turns to head upstairs and disappears while Shippo says he is going to head back outside to the place where he is staying. Hearing him, Margie goes to him to hug and says she will be out there in a little bit to see him. Moments later, Shippo turns and heads outside to go back to the place where he is staying. When he comes back to it, he heads inside and goes back to the haystack to lay down. After laying down, Shippo rests while waiting for Margie to come in. He soon hears the door opening and sees Margie coming inside along with the boy his age with her. Upon seeing the boy, Shippo asks Margie who he is and Margie answers saying he is her brother Kelvin and he wanted to come out with her to see him. They come over to the haystack to join Shippo and Margie asks what he wants to do tomorrow. Shippo replies telling her that he would like to wander around a bit to see what is around here and try to figure out where he is at. Afterwards, Shippo soon falls asleep while Margie and Kelvin watch him sleep.
The next morning, Shippo wakes up and finds Margie and Kelvin aren't there anymore and gets up to go to the door and goes outside. When he comes outside, Shippo starts to look around a bit, but runs into Kelvin who says to him that he just heard something has happened to his dad at the mine. Shippo responds asking where Margie is and Kelvin says Margie is upstairs in her room. Moments later, Kelvin goes off somewhere while Shippo heads inside Margie's house to the big combination living room / dinning room area and finds Margie's mom there. She sees him and comes up to him to ask what brings him here today. Shippo responds saying he just wanted to come over and play with Margie and asks if she is here. Margie's mom answers saying Margie is upstairs in her room, but she is very worried about her dad and may not want to play today. Upon hearing her, Shippo says Margie must love her dad very much and then asks what happened to him. Moments later, Margie's mother replies saying some men stopped by here to tell us some monsters appeared in the mine and something bad happened to him, and she is also worried and hope he is okay. Shippo soon responds saying he knows how she must feel since he lost his father a while ago in a terrible battle. Before Shippo continues rambling on about that, Margie's mother interrupts saying she already knows all about that as Margie already told her all about him.
Shippo then says instead that since he is very grateful to have a nice place to stay here, he'll go to the mines to see if he can find Margie's dad. As Margie's mom hears him, she thanks him as she really appreciates him doing that and says she will give him something that will help him out. Moments later, Margie's mom gives Shippo a Wooden Club and says it was left here by a visitor a long time ago who never came back for it and is sure it will help Shippo. He then tells Margie's mom that he will go upstairs first to see Margie and let her know where he is going so that she doesn't worry about him as well. Afterward, Margie's mom walks off while he heads upstairs to Margie's room. He knocks on a door thinking it is Margie's room, and finds out it is when he hears Margie's voice saying come in. Upon hearing Margie's voice, Shippo opens the door and sees Margie in there next to her bed. As Margie sees him, she says to him that she is sorry and doesn't feel like coming out and playing. Shippo asks why she does not feel like coming out and playing and Margie says she is just worried about her dad and does not feel like playing. Moments later, Shippo says he knows she is worried about her dad as her mom told him, and he is going to go to the mines to find him. Just as Margie hears him, she says please don't go as she does not want to be worried about him as well.
He soon responds saying to not worry about him as he will be coming back here after he finds her father. Margie then says if he must go, then let me give you this. She gives Shippo a necklace with a talisman on it and says it is a necklace with a talisman that her mom made for her which she told is supposed to protect her. Afterwards, he thanks Margie and tells her to not worry about him because he will be back. He think turns to leave Margie's room and heads back downstairs. Just as he comes downstairs, Shippo heads to the door and leaves Margie's house. Upon coming back outside, Shippo runs into Kelvin outside who asks him if he wants to play. Shippo tells him he can't play right now as he is leaving to go to the mines to find Margie's dad. Hearing him, Kelvin asks if he can come along and Shippo says he is welcome to come along. Kelvin joins Shippo and they turn to head to the north gate. When they come to the north gate, Shippo opens the gate and heads north with Kelvin through the forest until the forest ends at a large field. They then travels across the field for a short while until he comes to where there is a mountainous area and a mine entrance. Seeing the mine entrance, Shippo and Kelvin head inside and find a lantern nearby to use to search for Margie's dad. After traveling through the mines, Shippo and Kelvin soon find Margie's dad on the ground tied up and go to untie him. Just as he gets up, he thanks Shippo for coming to his rescue and says that while he and a few other miners searching for treasure, he was suddenly jumped by a couple of guys while the other miners fled the mine and says he thinks one of the guy's heads looked like a fish. Shippo is suddenly surprised by this and says that sounds like the Thunder Brothers who engaged in battle with his father, but that is not possible since he has seen them disappear in a flash of light. Then Margie's dad says that he is not sure though as it was too dark to see for certain. Shippo responds and says they sound leave the mine and head home quickly in case whoever they are, are still in the mine somewhere. Moments later, Shippo, Kelvin, and Margie's dad quickly head back the way they came and exit the mine.
They head back south to Margie's yard and enter the house. As they enter the house, they find Margie and her mom there in the big combination living room / dining room. Shippo goes over to Margie while her dad goes over to her mom. Margie thanks Shippo for bringing her father back safely and Shippo says he didn't want her losing her dad as well and tells her what happened was her dad was jumped by a couple guys and tied up. Shippo then tells Margie her dad thinks one of their heads looked like fish and that he feels that it couldn't be the Thunder Brothers. Just as Margie hears him, she says she thought he told her his dad and they disappeared in a flash of light. Shippo soon says it couldn't be them, but wants to know if there is anyplace to go as it is worth having the matter investigated. Margie responds by saying there is a village near there named Kema to the southeast where there is a wise village elder that she knows about and may know more about this and know what do. At this point, Margie joins with Shippo to go with him and Kelvin possibly tags along as well as Shippo begins his quest. Further ideas continue after this and I welcome anyone with ideas that I can use.
It starts with the main character who is Shippo, the fox boy with the bushy tail, who was witnessing a battle going on between his father and the Thunder Brothers, Hiten and Manten. His father is a full furred multi-tailed fox. While witnessing the battle, there is suddenly a bright flash and after it fades quickly, Hiten, Manten and Shippo's father have disappeared. Shippo, not knowing what just happened, starts looking around and suddenly feels the presence of someone there, yet no one is there. He becomes really scared and runs off in a direction down a path that leads to a well. When he comes to the well, Shippo finds he is thirsty and decides to see if he can get water from it. However, upon trying to get water, he falls down into the well and suddenly finds himself falling through what looks like space. Next thing he knows, he lands on something hard and finds himself in a dark area that turns out to be a room with a ceiling. He wonders where he fell in from and soon moves on to explore the underground sewer tunnels he is from. After a while, he comes to a dead end, but finds a ladder going up somewhere and climbs up it.
At the top of the ladder, Shippo sees an opening that looks like the way out and heads outside into the daylight. Upon coming out into the daylight, Shippo finds he is in an unfamiliar hilly area and makes his way down to a nearby forest trail. Here, Shippo comes to a fork in the trail where he can go straight or left and heads to the left. He continues on and comes to a fenced in area with a gate over the trail. Seeing the gate, Shippo heads in to explore. Here, I was going to have this the Forest Haven Area with the kids, Erik and Alice Todd, but at this time I am thinking to change my mind on that because Erik and Alice Todd are being used in another story of mine and I am starting to feel this and that story might clash with each other. Instead, I am currently thinking Shippo comes up towards a playhouse hangout in the forest area where he runs into a girl name Margie or Margie discovers him. Upon seeing Shippo, Margie asks him why he is out here alone and Shippo tells her his father told him his mother was gone sometime after he was done and the story about what happened recently to his father and how he got there. After hearing Shippo, Margie tells him that she is sorry to hear that and that he should come back with her to her home as it would be better than staying out alone and starving to death.
Shippo takes Margie up on her offer and tells her his name is Shippo and Margie then says her name is Margie. He then follows Margie back to her home and Margie notices his fluffy tail and says what a cute fluffy tail he has as he is the first one she has seen with one. Shippo giggles a bit and Margie then says lets head back to her home and meet her mom as she is sure she will let him stay. After walking for a while, they come to the north gate of the forested area and pass through it into Margie's yard. They soon come to Margie's house and go inside into the big combination living room / dining room area where they find Margie's mom. Just after Margie says to her mom that she is home, her mom sees Shippo and asks who is that with her. Margie tells her mom he is Shippo and she found him in her forested play area why she was out there. Her mom responds to her that she knows better than to bring home strange boys. Moments later, Margie's mom goes to Shippo and asks him where is his parents. Shippo responds by explaining to her about his parents. Afterwards, Margie's mom sees Shippo's fluffy tail and says he has a cute fluffy tail and is the first she has seen with one around here. Margie then asks her mom if Shippo can stay with them since he has nowhere else to go. Margie's mom responds saying that since he has a cute fluffy tail and he has nowhere else to go, he can stay.
Upon hearing her mom, Margie thanks her and asks where Shippo can stay. Her mom then tells Margie that Shippo can stay in the place near here on their property since it has been empty for some time except for a haystack, a cabinet, and some tables and chairs. Margie then says that sounds good and will take him over there to get him settled in. Moments later, Margie turns to Shippo and says she will take him over to the place nearby so he can check it out. Shippo responds saying it sounds like a nice place for him to stay in. Afterwards, Margie's mom says she is Margie's mom and says she is sure he will love the hospitality here they can give him and if things get too bad for him out in the place nearby, he is welcome to come back in here and sleep in the spare bed in Margie's room. Hearing her, Shippo smilies a bit while Margie turns and heads back to the door. Shippo goes to follow Margie as she leads him back outside to the place they were talking about. When they get there, they go inside and Shippo sees everything Margie's mom said is there really is there. He sees the haystack and heads over to the bottom of it to lay down to rest while Margie comes over to hug him and make him comfortable. Shippo falls asleep instantly to rest while Margie gives him a kiss and then heads to the door to leave. Just as she comes to the door, Margie's dad comes in and Margie says hi to him and didn't expect him to come in here.
He responds by saying that he just came to see the boy Margie's mom told him about" Margie's dad then goes over to Shippo laying at the bottom of the haystack asleep. He soon turns and goes back to the door to leave. When he comes to the door, Margie's dad says Shippo does look cure for a boy who is currently asleep and that he agrees with Margie's mom that he can stay with them and in there as it is also okay with him. He then leaves and Margie takes one last look at Shippo sleeping and then leaves Shippo alone to sleep. Several hours later, it is evening and Shippo wakes up from his rest and finds he is hungry. He gets up and decides to go find Margie and get something to eat and heads to the door to go outside. Once outside, Shippo heads to Margie's house and goes inside to find Margie and a boy his age along with her mom and dad at the table eating dinner. Moments later, Margie turns to see Shippo and says to him it is good he came to join them for dinner as she was thinking of bringing something out to him to eat, and tells him to come have a seat. Upon hearing Margie, Shippo goes to the table to sit down and Margie's mom gives him a plate of dinner and Shippo proceeds to eat. When they finish dinner, Margie says to Shippo she will be coming out to where he is staying soon to make sure he is comfortable for the night.
Margie's dad then gets up from the table and says to Shippo that he is Margie's dad and is nice to meet him. Then he turns to Margie's mom and tells her that he will be departing in the morning for the mine up north to search and dig for treasure. Afterwards, he turns to head upstairs and disappears while Shippo says he is going to head back outside to the place where he is staying. Hearing him, Margie goes to him to hug and says she will be out there in a little bit to see him. Moments later, Shippo turns and heads outside to go back to the place where he is staying. When he comes back to it, he heads inside and goes back to the haystack to lay down. After laying down, Shippo rests while waiting for Margie to come in. He soon hears the door opening and sees Margie coming inside along with the boy his age with her. Upon seeing the boy, Shippo asks Margie who he is and Margie answers saying he is her brother Kelvin and he wanted to come out with her to see him. They come over to the haystack to join Shippo and Margie asks what he wants to do tomorrow. Shippo replies telling her that he would like to wander around a bit to see what is around here and try to figure out where he is at. Afterwards, Shippo soon falls asleep while Margie and Kelvin watch him sleep.
The next morning, Shippo wakes up and finds Margie and Kelvin aren't there anymore and gets up to go to the door and goes outside. When he comes outside, Shippo starts to look around a bit, but runs into Kelvin who says to him that he just heard something has happened to his dad at the mine. Shippo responds asking where Margie is and Kelvin says Margie is upstairs in her room. Moments later, Kelvin goes off somewhere while Shippo heads inside Margie's house to the big combination living room / dinning room area and finds Margie's mom there. She sees him and comes up to him to ask what brings him here today. Shippo responds saying he just wanted to come over and play with Margie and asks if she is here. Margie's mom answers saying Margie is upstairs in her room, but she is very worried about her dad and may not want to play today. Upon hearing her, Shippo says Margie must love her dad very much and then asks what happened to him. Moments later, Margie's mother replies saying some men stopped by here to tell us some monsters appeared in the mine and something bad happened to him, and she is also worried and hope he is okay. Shippo soon responds saying he knows how she must feel since he lost his father a while ago in a terrible battle. Before Shippo continues rambling on about that, Margie's mother interrupts saying she already knows all about that as Margie already told her all about him.
Shippo then says instead that since he is very grateful to have a nice place to stay here, he'll go to the mines to see if he can find Margie's dad. As Margie's mom hears him, she thanks him as she really appreciates him doing that and says she will give him something that will help him out. Moments later, Margie's mom gives Shippo a Wooden Club and says it was left here by a visitor a long time ago who never came back for it and is sure it will help Shippo. He then tells Margie's mom that he will go upstairs first to see Margie and let her know where he is going so that she doesn't worry about him as well. Afterward, Margie's mom walks off while he heads upstairs to Margie's room. He knocks on a door thinking it is Margie's room, and finds out it is when he hears Margie's voice saying come in. Upon hearing Margie's voice, Shippo opens the door and sees Margie in there next to her bed. As Margie sees him, she says to him that she is sorry and doesn't feel like coming out and playing. Shippo asks why she does not feel like coming out and playing and Margie says she is just worried about her dad and does not feel like playing. Moments later, Shippo says he knows she is worried about her dad as her mom told him, and he is going to go to the mines to find him. Just as Margie hears him, she says please don't go as she does not want to be worried about him as well.
He soon responds saying to not worry about him as he will be coming back here after he finds her father. Margie then says if he must go, then let me give you this. She gives Shippo a necklace with a talisman on it and says it is a necklace with a talisman that her mom made for her which she told is supposed to protect her. Afterwards, he thanks Margie and tells her to not worry about him because he will be back. He think turns to leave Margie's room and heads back downstairs. Just as he comes downstairs, Shippo heads to the door and leaves Margie's house. Upon coming back outside, Shippo runs into Kelvin outside who asks him if he wants to play. Shippo tells him he can't play right now as he is leaving to go to the mines to find Margie's dad. Hearing him, Kelvin asks if he can come along and Shippo says he is welcome to come along. Kelvin joins Shippo and they turn to head to the north gate. When they come to the north gate, Shippo opens the gate and heads north with Kelvin through the forest until the forest ends at a large field. They then travels across the field for a short while until he comes to where there is a mountainous area and a mine entrance. Seeing the mine entrance, Shippo and Kelvin head inside and find a lantern nearby to use to search for Margie's dad. After traveling through the mines, Shippo and Kelvin soon find Margie's dad on the ground tied up and go to untie him. Just as he gets up, he thanks Shippo for coming to his rescue and says that while he and a few other miners searching for treasure, he was suddenly jumped by a couple of guys while the other miners fled the mine and says he thinks one of the guy's heads looked like a fish. Shippo is suddenly surprised by this and says that sounds like the Thunder Brothers who engaged in battle with his father, but that is not possible since he has seen them disappear in a flash of light. Then Margie's dad says that he is not sure though as it was too dark to see for certain. Shippo responds and says they sound leave the mine and head home quickly in case whoever they are, are still in the mine somewhere. Moments later, Shippo, Kelvin, and Margie's dad quickly head back the way they came and exit the mine.
They head back south to Margie's yard and enter the house. As they enter the house, they find Margie and her mom there in the big combination living room / dining room. Shippo goes over to Margie while her dad goes over to her mom. Margie thanks Shippo for bringing her father back safely and Shippo says he didn't want her losing her dad as well and tells her what happened was her dad was jumped by a couple guys and tied up. Shippo then tells Margie her dad thinks one of their heads looked like fish and that he feels that it couldn't be the Thunder Brothers. Just as Margie hears him, she says she thought he told her his dad and they disappeared in a flash of light. Shippo soon says it couldn't be them, but wants to know if there is anyplace to go as it is worth having the matter investigated. Margie responds by saying there is a village near there named Kema to the southeast where there is a wise village elder that she knows about and may know more about this and know what do. At this point, Margie joins with Shippo to go with him and Kelvin possibly tags along as well as Shippo begins his quest. Further ideas continue after this and I welcome anyone with ideas that I can use.